Web readers tend to scan through your information, picking
up what they need here and there. Print
readers tend to read more for detail, spending more time and effort digesting
sentences. Your web copy, therefore,
requires a different style from writing in print.
Web writers often fall into the trap of telling visitors everything
there is to know, especially when writing “About Us” and when providing
descriptions of products and services.
But this doesn’t work. Web
visitors are less likely to stare at pages filled with text than at any other
feature on the Internet.
What does
work? A few short paragraphs, short,
simple sentences and everyday, common words.
Remember, your visitors may be spending less than a minute
on your website, and that’s why you need to engage them with your text. Following these three simple guidelines can
help.
First, write concisely.
Short, well crafted text is easier to understand and to absorb and will
enable your visitors to remember the most important information you have to
offer. Too much information is easier to
forget.
Second, write everything so it’s relevant to your visitors. Your company history, for example, may be
very impressive. Your web visitor,
however, is not as interested in what you’ve done for yourselves as in what you
can do for him or her. That’s why
they’ve come to visit.
Third, write only what’s needed here and now. Address the most important questions that your
visitors will ask and provide contact numbers and e-mail links. If what you’ve written is exciting and they
want more information from you, they’ll ask for it.
In less than a minute, visitors to your website are unlikely
to read through detailed information, and much of the clutter filling your web
pages will go unread. So, follow the
advice of writer Elmore Leonard: “Leave out the parts that people skip
over.”
2 comments:
Great advice John. I think it's time for me to shorten my blog posts and articles. I read this post in exactly less than a minute. :)
Hi Jacqueline -
Thanks for your note.
I was inspired to write this series when I discovered just how much web copy I was leaving unread before I changed pages.
Let's keep electronic communication brief and linger longer over face-to-face conversation.
Cheers,
John
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